Crystal

Lovely work, most impressed by the coloring technique used here, nice work on the overall composition too and the background.

But there are few things that could have been improved, anatomy wise her hand is quite small compared to her body/face, and i know her facial features look the way they are becasue that's the art style chosen by the artist but it feels a little bit at odds with the semi-realistic shading style, a little less pointy chin and a slightly more detailed nose would have -IMO- improved the overall drawing.

One last thing, the left side of her hair looks a little too flat compared to the well-shaded right side .. it could have used some more details (i.e strands) that would cast shadows and give it more volume like the rest of the hair.